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From:martin.brown Date:August 11 2009 1:41pm
Subject:svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r16067 - trunk/mysql-monitor-2.1
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Author: mcbrown
Date: 2009-08-11 15:41:46 +0200 (Tue, 11 Aug 2009)
New Revision: 16067

Log:
Some typo corrections
Addressing the Live feed opt-out notice



Modified:
   trunk/mysql-monitor-2.1/dashboard-whatsnew.xml


Modified: trunk/mysql-monitor-2.1/dashboard-whatsnew.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/mysql-monitor-2.1/dashboard-whatsnew.xml	2009-08-11 11:45:30 UTC (rev 16066)
+++ trunk/mysql-monitor-2.1/dashboard-whatsnew.xml	2009-08-11 13:41:46 UTC (rev 16067)
Changed blocks: 5, Lines Added: 16, Lines Deleted: 10; 2676 bytes

@@ -12,12 +12,12 @@
   <para>
     The What's New Page provides a simplified interface for providing
     updates and news related to your MySQL Enterprise Subscription. By
-    default, the information is automatically updated every hour.
-    Todisable the updates, or force an update, see
+    default, the information is automatically updated every hour. To
+    disable the updates, or force an update, see
     <xref linkend="mem-whatsnew-configuration"/>.
   </para>
 
-  <figure condition="dynamic:select:default">
+  <figure>
     <title>The What's New Tab</title>
     <mediaobject>
       <imageobject>

@@ -31,10 +31,6 @@
   </figure>
 
   <para>
-    The information provided
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
     The <guilabel>What's New</guilabel> page is divided into three main
     sections:
   </para>

@@ -55,7 +51,7 @@
         interface to the list of currently open issues with MySQL
         Support as identified through the MySQL Enterprise and Support
         websites. Issues that are currently marked in the system as
-        <emphasis>Waiting On Customer</emphasis> are also addded to the
+        <emphasis>Waiting On Customer</emphasis> are also added to the
         main MySQL Enterprise Dashboard above the Heat Chart.
       </para>
 

@@ -114,7 +110,7 @@
 
       <note>
         <para>
-          To use poll the MySQL Enterprise site directlry your
+          To use poll the MySQL Enterprise site directly your
           &merlin_server; must have access to the MySQL Enterprise
           website. If your &merlin_server; is not directly connected to
           the Internet, you can set an HTTP Proxy to be used to access

@@ -126,12 +122,22 @@
 
   </itemizedlist>
 
+  <note>
+    <para>
+      You can disable the display of your open Support issues and
+      product notifications by using the <guibutton>Configure What's
+      New</guibutton> link on the <guilabel>What's New</guilabel> page.
+      For more information, see
+      <xref linkend="mem-whatsnew-configuration"/>.
+    </para>
+  </note>
+
   <section id="mem-whatsnew-configuration">
 
     <title>Setting What's New Configuration</title>
 
     <para>
-      You can configure the operation and forceably update the
+      You can configure the operation and forcibly update the
       information on the What's New page by clicking on the
       <guibutton>configure what's new</guibutton> button at the
       top-right of the What's New page.


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