svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r334 - in trunk: . query-browser

[paul]

Author: paul
Date: 2005-11-14 21:17:23 +0100 (Mon, 14 Nov 2005)
New Revision: 334

Log:
 r992@kite-hub:  paul | 2005-11-14 14:17:13 -0600
 Update a couple of QB icon descriptions. (Bug#14758)


Modified:
   trunk/
   trunk/query-browser/query-browser.xml


Property changes on: trunk
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Name: svk:merge
   - b5ec3a16-e900-0410-9ad2-d183a3acac99:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:3697
bf112a9c-6c03-0410-a055-ad865cd57414:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:990
   + b5ec3a16-e900-0410-9ad2-d183a3acac99:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:3697
bf112a9c-6c03-0410-a055-ad865cd57414:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:992

Modified: trunk/query-browser/query-browser.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/query-browser/query-browser.xml	2005-11-14 17:18:53 UTC (rev 333)
+++ trunk/query-browser/query-browser.xml	2005-11-14 20:17:23 UTC (rev 334)
@@ -134,8 +134,8 @@
 
       <para>
         &query_browser; runs on recent 32-bit Windows NT based operating
-        systems, including Windows 2000, XP, and 2003.
-        It doesn't run on Windows NT 4 and below.
+        systems, including Windows 2000, XP, and 2003. It doesn't run on
+        Windows NT 4 and below.
       </para>
 
       <para>
@@ -197,10 +197,10 @@
 
       <para>
         &query_browser; runs on Linux machines that have a graphical
-        desktop installed. It is designed to run under the Gnome
-        desktop with GTK2. It has been tested on Linux kernel
-        versions 2.4 and 2.6, but it should also run on other versions,
-        and even on a number of Unix-like operating systems.
+        desktop installed. It is designed to run under the Gnome desktop
+        with GTK2. It has been tested on Linux kernel versions 2.4 and
+        2.6, but it should also run on other versions, and even on a
+        number of Unix-like operating systems.
       </para>
 
       <para>
@@ -415,7 +415,8 @@
 lang="en" format="PNG"/>
           </imageobject>
           <textobject>
-            <phrase lang="en">The &query_browser; main query
window</phrase>
+            <phrase lang="en">The &query_browser; main query
+            window</phrase>
           </textobject>
         </mediaobject>
       </figure>
@@ -586,7 +587,8 @@
               <imagedata fileref="images/querybar.png" lang="en" format="PNG"/>
             </imageobject>
             <textobject>
-              <phrase lang="en">The query area expanded to ten lines</phrase>
+              <phrase lang="en">The query area expanded to ten
+              lines</phrase>
             </textobject>
           </mediaobject>
         </figure>
@@ -678,7 +680,8 @@
 lang="en" format="PNG"/>
             </imageobject>
             <textobject>
-              <phrase lang="en">The &query_browser; status icons</phrase>
+              <phrase lang="en">The &query_browser; status
+              icons</phrase>
             </textobject>
           </mediaobject>
         </figure>
@@ -1644,9 +1647,9 @@
 
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            <literal>View</literal>: This icon looks like an eye and is
-            used to open the field viewer to view the contents of the
-            field. The field viewer can be used to view
+            <literal>View</literal>: This icon looks like a magnifying
+            glass and is used to open the field viewer to view the
+            contents of the field. The field viewer can be used to view
             <literal>TEXT</literal> fields and
<literal>BLOB</literal>
             fields that contain images.
           </para>
@@ -1654,7 +1657,7 @@
 
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            <literal>Edit</literal>: This field looks like a wrench and
+            <literal>Edit</literal>: This field looks like a pencil and
             opens the field viewer in edit mode, allowing you to make
             changes to the data and apply the changes to the result set.
           </para>