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From:shinz Date:November 1 2005 12:58am
Subject:svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r205 - trunk/refman-5.1
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Author: shinz
Date: 2005-11-01 00:58:28 +0100 (Tue, 01 Nov 2005)
New Revision: 205

Log:
Commit changes that didn't make it before

Modified:
   trunk/refman-5.1/tutorial.xml

Modified: trunk/refman-5.1/tutorial.xml
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--- trunk/refman-5.1/tutorial.xml	2005-10-31 20:46:16 UTC (rev 204)
+++ trunk/refman-5.1/tutorial.xml	2005-10-31 23:58:28 UTC (rev 205)
@@ -102,11 +102,11 @@
 
     <para>
       To connect to the server, you will usually need to provide a MySQL
-      username when you invoke <command>mysql</command> and, most
+      user name when you invoke <command>mysql</command> and, most
       likely, a password. If the server runs on a machine other than the
-      one where you log in, you will also need to specify a hostname.
+      one where you log in, you will also need to specify a host name.
       Contact your administrator to find out what connection parameters
-      you should use to connect (that is, what host, username, and
+      you should use to connect (that is, what host, user name, and
       password to use). Once you know the proper parameters, you should
       be able to connect like this:
     </para>
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@
 
     <para>
       <literal>host</literal> and <literal>user</literal>
represent the
-      hostname where your MySQL server is running and the username of
+      host name where your MySQL server is running and the user name of
       your MySQL account. Substitute appropriate values for your setup.
       The <literal>********</literal> represents your password; enter it
       when <command>mysql</command> displays the <literal>Enter
@@ -692,7 +692,7 @@
 </programlisting>
 
     <para>
-      where <literal>your_mysql_name</literal> is the MySQL username
+      where <literal>your_mysql_name</literal> is the MySQL user name
       assigned to you and <literal>your_client_host</literal> is the
       host from which you connect to the server.
     </para>
@@ -730,7 +730,7 @@
         Windows, this restriction does not apply, although you must
         refer to databases and tables using the same lettercase
         throughout a given query. However, for a variety of reasons, our
-        recommended best practise is always to use the same lettercase
+        recommended best practice is always to use the same lettercase
         that was used when the database was created.)
       </para>
 

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