svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r16789 - trunk/mysql-monitor-common

[martin.brown]

Author: mcbrown
Date: 2009-09-24 11:49:30 +0200 (Thu, 24 Sep 2009)
New Revision: 16789

Log:
Rewording a clumsy paragraph



Modified:
   trunk/mysql-monitor-common/dashboard-overview-core.xml


Modified: trunk/mysql-monitor-common/dashboard-overview-core.xml
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--- trunk/mysql-monitor-common/dashboard-overview-core.xml	2009-09-24 09:22:27 UTC (rev 16788)
+++ trunk/mysql-monitor-common/dashboard-overview-core.xml	2009-09-24 09:49:30 UTC (rev 16789)
Changed blocks: 1, Lines Added: 3, Lines Deleted: 5; 875 bytes

@@ -401,11 +401,9 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      <literal>Critical</literal> alerts appear on this page immediately
-      below the graphs&ndash;quickly attracting your attention. For a
-      description of all the different alarm levels see,
-      <xref linkend="mem-heat-chart"/>. This is the subject of
-      discussion in <xref linkend="mem-events"/>.
+      Alerts from the event system will be displayed immediately below
+      the charts. For more information on the events display, see
+      <xref linkend="mem-events"/>.
     </para>
 
   </section>