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From:jon.stephens Date:May 20 2009 7:35am
Subject:svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r15006 - in trunk: refman-4.1 refman-5.0 refman-5.1 refman-5.4 refman-6.0
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Author: jstephens
Date: 2009-05-20 09:35:38 +0200 (Wed, 20 May 2009)
New Revision: 15006

Log:

"should" -> "must"

Fix run-on sentences

(Ingo/Paul)



Modified:
   trunk/refman-4.1/dba-privilege-system.xml
   trunk/refman-5.0/dba-privilege-system.xml
   trunk/refman-5.1/dba-privilege-system.xml
   trunk/refman-5.4/dba-privilege-system.xml
   trunk/refman-6.0/dba-privilege-system.xml


Modified: trunk/refman-4.1/dba-privilege-system.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-4.1/dba-privilege-system.xml	2009-05-20 02:55:04 UTC (rev 15005)
+++ trunk/refman-4.1/dba-privilege-system.xml	2009-05-20 07:35:38 UTC (rev 15006)
Changed blocks: 2, Lines Added: 3, Lines Deleted: 3; 1111 bytes

@@ -1433,7 +1433,7 @@
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          The user name and host name parts, if quoted, should be quoted
+          The user name and host name parts, if quoted, must be quoted
           separately. That is, write
           <literal>'me'@'localhost'</literal>, not
           <literal>'me@localhost'</literal>; the latter is interpreted

@@ -1566,8 +1566,8 @@
           For host values specified as IP numbers, you can specify a
           netmask indicating how many address bits to use for the
           network number. The syntax is
-          <literal><replaceable>host_ip</replaceable>/<replaceable>netmask</replaceable></literal>For
-          example:
+          <literal><replaceable>host_ip</replaceable>/<replaceable>netmask</replaceable></literal>.
+          For example:
         </para>
 
 <programlisting>


Modified: trunk/refman-5.0/dba-privilege-system.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.0/dba-privilege-system.xml	2009-05-20 02:55:04 UTC (rev 15005)
+++ trunk/refman-5.0/dba-privilege-system.xml	2009-05-20 07:35:38 UTC (rev 15006)
Changed blocks: 2, Lines Added: 3, Lines Deleted: 3; 1111 bytes

@@ -1624,7 +1624,7 @@
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          The user name and host name parts, if quoted, should be quoted
+          The user name and host name parts, if quoted, must be quoted
           separately. That is, write
           <literal>'me'@'localhost'</literal>, not
           <literal>'me@localhost'</literal>; the latter is interpreted

@@ -1757,8 +1757,8 @@
           For host values specified as IP numbers, you can specify a
           netmask indicating how many address bits to use for the
           network number. The syntax is
-          <literal><replaceable>host_ip</replaceable>/<replaceable>netmask</replaceable></literal>For
-          example:
+          <literal><replaceable>host_ip</replaceable>/<replaceable>netmask</replaceable></literal>.
+          For example:
         </para>
 
 <programlisting>


Modified: trunk/refman-5.1/dba-privilege-system.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.1/dba-privilege-system.xml	2009-05-20 02:55:04 UTC (rev 15005)
+++ trunk/refman-5.1/dba-privilege-system.xml	2009-05-20 07:35:38 UTC (rev 15006)
Changed blocks: 2, Lines Added: 3, Lines Deleted: 3; 1111 bytes

@@ -1656,7 +1656,7 @@
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          The user name and host name parts, if quoted, should be quoted
+          The user name and host name parts, if quoted, must be quoted
           separately. That is, write
           <literal>'me'@'localhost'</literal>, not
           <literal>'me@localhost'</literal>; the latter is interpreted

@@ -1789,8 +1789,8 @@
           For host values specified as IP numbers, you can specify a
           netmask indicating how many address bits to use for the
           network number. The syntax is
-          <literal><replaceable>host_ip</replaceable>/<replaceable>netmask</replaceable></literal>For
-          example:
+          <literal><replaceable>host_ip</replaceable>/<replaceable>netmask</replaceable></literal>.
+          For example:
         </para>
 
 <programlisting>


Modified: trunk/refman-5.4/dba-privilege-system.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.4/dba-privilege-system.xml	2009-05-20 02:55:04 UTC (rev 15005)
+++ trunk/refman-5.4/dba-privilege-system.xml	2009-05-20 07:35:38 UTC (rev 15006)
Changed blocks: 2, Lines Added: 3, Lines Deleted: 3; 1111 bytes

@@ -1642,7 +1642,7 @@
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          The user name and host name parts, if quoted, should be quoted
+          The user name and host name parts, if quoted, must be quoted
           separately. That is, write
           <literal>'me'@'localhost'</literal>, not
           <literal>'me@localhost'</literal>; the latter is interpreted

@@ -1775,8 +1775,8 @@
           For host values specified as IP numbers, you can specify a
           netmask indicating how many address bits to use for the
           network number. The syntax is
-          <literal><replaceable>host_ip</replaceable>/<replaceable>netmask</replaceable></literal>For
-          example:
+          <literal><replaceable>host_ip</replaceable>/<replaceable>netmask</replaceable></literal>.
+          For example:
         </para>
 
 <programlisting>


Modified: trunk/refman-6.0/dba-privilege-system.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-6.0/dba-privilege-system.xml	2009-05-20 02:55:04 UTC (rev 15005)
+++ trunk/refman-6.0/dba-privilege-system.xml	2009-05-20 07:35:38 UTC (rev 15006)
Changed blocks: 2, Lines Added: 3, Lines Deleted: 3; 1111 bytes

@@ -1665,7 +1665,7 @@
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          The user name and host name parts, if quoted, should be quoted
+          The user name and host name parts, if quoted, must be quoted
           separately. That is, write
           <literal>'me'@'localhost'</literal>, not
           <literal>'me@localhost'</literal>; the latter is interpreted

@@ -1798,8 +1798,8 @@
           For host values specified as IP numbers, you can specify a
           netmask indicating how many address bits to use for the
           network number. The syntax is
-          <literal><replaceable>host_ip</replaceable>/<replaceable>netmask</replaceable></literal>For
-          example:
+          <literal><replaceable>host_ip</replaceable>/<replaceable>netmask</replaceable></literal>.
+          For example:
         </para>
 
 <programlisting>


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