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From:plavin Date:January 10 2008 8:23pm
Subject:svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r9557 - trunk/workbench
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Author: plavin
Date: 2008-01-10 21:23:27 +0100 (Thu, 10 Jan 2008)
New Revision: 9557

Log:
Review <remarks>, remove those that are no longer necessary


Modified:
   trunk/workbench/foreign-key-relationships.xml
   trunk/workbench/installing.xml
   trunk/workbench/options-connections.xml
   trunk/workbench/reference.xml
   trunk/workbench/tables.xml
   trunk/workbench/tutorial.xml
   trunk/workbench/workbench.xml


Modified: trunk/workbench/foreign-key-relationships.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/workbench/foreign-key-relationships.xml	2008-01-10 18:14:05 UTC (rev 9556)
+++ trunk/workbench/foreign-key-relationships.xml	2008-01-10 20:23:27 UTC (rev 9557)
Changed blocks: 1, Lines Added: 1, Lines Deleted: 0; 485 bytes

@@ -198,6 +198,7 @@
         </listitem>
 
         <listitem>
+          
           <para>
             <literal>captionYOffs</literal> &ndash; The <quote>y</quote>
             offset of the caption.


Modified: trunk/workbench/installing.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/workbench/installing.xml	2008-01-10 18:14:05 UTC (rev 9556)
+++ trunk/workbench/installing.xml	2008-01-10 20:23:27 UTC (rev 9557)
Changed blocks: 2, Lines Added: 2, Lines Deleted: 2; 676 bytes

@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@
         <option>complete</option> option.
 
         <remark>
-          [PL] Expand when more features
+          [PL] Expand when more features -- do for next beta
         </remark>
       </para>
 

@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@
     </note>
 
     <remark>
-      [PL] When appropriate, dd sections for other OSs as described in
+      [PL] When appropriate, add sections for other OSs as described in
       TOC.txt
     </remark>
 


Modified: trunk/workbench/options-connections.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/workbench/options-connections.xml	2008-01-10 18:14:05 UTC (rev 9556)
+++ trunk/workbench/options-connections.xml	2008-01-10 20:23:27 UTC (rev 9557)
Changed blocks: 2, Lines Added: 4, Lines Deleted: 16; 1558 bytes

@@ -36,25 +36,13 @@
     <guilabel>Driver</guilabel> list box.
 
     <remark>
-      [PL]Note about these options
+      [PL]Note other options in the future
     </remark>
   </para>
 
-<!--para>
-    <remark>[PL]This may still be true</remark>
-    Connections are automatically added to the
-    <literal>History</literal> tree whenever you establish a connection
-    to a MySQL server without using one of the profiles stored under the
-    <literal>Connections</literal> tree. They do not appear in the
-    drop-down box of the <literal>Connection</literal> dialog, but you
-    can use any of them by manually typing their name into the
-    <literal>Connection</literal> box of the
-    <literal>Connection</literal> dialog.
-  </para-->
-
   <para>
-    When you select a connection profile from <literal>Stored
-    Connection</literal> list box or when you create a new connection,
+    When you select a connection profile from the <guilabel>Stored
+    Connection</guilabel> list box or when you create a new connection,
     the <literal>Parameters</literal> tab displays the following fields:
   </para>
 

@@ -63,7 +51,7 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>
         <guilabel>Hostname</guilabel>: The host name or IP address of
-        MySQL server
+        the MySQL server
       </para>
     </listitem>
 


Modified: trunk/workbench/reference.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/workbench/reference.xml	2008-01-10 18:14:05 UTC (rev 9556)
+++ trunk/workbench/reference.xml	2008-01-10 20:23:27 UTC (rev 9557)
Changed blocks: 2, Lines Added: 1, Lines Deleted: 7; 867 bytes

@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@
         The <guimenu>Select</guimenu> option has three submenus,
         <guimenu>Select All</guimenu>, <guimenu>Similar
         Figures</guimenu>, and <guimenu>Connected Figures</guimenu>.
-        These menu items are only active when the <guilabel>EER
+        These menu items are only active when an <guilabel>EER
         Diagram</guilabel> tab is selected.
 
         <remark>

@@ -2199,12 +2199,6 @@
           <xref linkend="wb-foreign-key-relationships"/>.
         </para>
 
-        <para>
-          <remark>
-            More to come.
-          </remark>
-        </para>
-
       </section>
 
     </section>


Modified: trunk/workbench/tables.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/workbench/tables.xml	2008-01-10 18:14:05 UTC (rev 9556)
+++ trunk/workbench/tables.xml	2008-01-10 20:23:27 UTC (rev 9557)
Changed blocks: 1, Lines Added: 0, Lines Deleted: 7; 724 bytes

@@ -188,15 +188,8 @@
       Schemata</literal> panel. You can also access it from
       an EER Diagram by double clicking a table object. 
 
-      <remark>
-        For example, under Linux the Columns and Indexes are separate
-        tabs but under Windows they are combined in one. However, the
-        same basic functionality is available regardless of docking or
-        the particular OS.
-      </remark>
     </para>
 
-
 <!-- END INTRODUCTION -->
 
   <section id="wb-gui-editor-main-window">


Modified: trunk/workbench/tutorial.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/workbench/tutorial.xml	2008-01-10 18:14:05 UTC (rev 9556)
+++ trunk/workbench/tutorial.xml	2008-01-10 20:23:27 UTC (rev 9557)
Changed blocks: 1, Lines Added: 1, Lines Deleted: 5; 806 bytes

@@ -94,15 +94,11 @@
       <title>Adding an EER Diagram</title>
 
       <para>
-        To create an EER diagram for the <literal>sakila </literal>database, first add an
+        To create an EER diagram for the <literal>sakila</literal>database, first add an
         EER diagram by double clicking the <literal>Add
         Diagram</literal> icon in the <guilabel>EER Diagrams</guilabel>
         panel. This should open the <literal>EER Diagram</literal>
         canvas.
-
-        <remark>
-          How to get there otherwise
-        </remark>
       </para>
 
       <para>


Modified: trunk/workbench/workbench.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/workbench/workbench.xml	2008-01-10 18:14:05 UTC (rev 9556)
+++ trunk/workbench/workbench.xml	2008-01-10 20:23:27 UTC (rev 9557)
Changed blocks: 1, Lines Added: 0, Lines Deleted: 4; 430 bytes

@@ -27,10 +27,6 @@
       </para>
 
       <para>
-        The documentation is currently incomplete.
-      </para>
-
-      <para>
         Document generated on:
 
 <?dbtimestamp format="Y-m-d"?>


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