svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r1603 - in trunk: refman-4.1 refman-5.0 refman-5.1

[mcbrown]

Author: mcbrown
Date: 2006-03-16 16:06:07 +0100 (Thu, 16 Mar 2006)
New Revision: 1603

Log:
Fixed java.util.Map reference (spurious in 5.1) and fix english in connector section. 


Modified:
   trunk/refman-4.1/connector-mxj.xml
   trunk/refman-5.0/connector-mxj.xml
   trunk/refman-5.1/connector-mxj.xml

Modified: trunk/refman-4.1/connector-mxj.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-4.1/connector-mxj.xml	2006-03-16 14:12:26 UTC (rev 1602)
+++ trunk/refman-4.1/connector-mxj.xml	2006-03-16 15:06:07 UTC (rev 1603)
@@ -438,7 +438,7 @@
     <title>Running within a Java Object</title>
 
     <para>
-      Have a java application and wish to <quote>embed</quote> a MySQL
+      If you have a java application and wish to <quote>embed</quote> a MySQL
       database, make use of the com.mysql.management.MysqldResource
       class directly. This class may be instantiated with the default
       (no argument) constructor, or by passing in a java.io.File object
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      The MysqldResource will allow you to "start" MySQL with a
+      The MysqldResource enables you to "start" MySQL with a
       java.util.Map of server options which you provide, as well as
       "shutdown" the database. The following example shows a simplistic
       way to embed MySQL in an application using plain java objects:

Modified: trunk/refman-5.0/connector-mxj.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.0/connector-mxj.xml	2006-03-16 14:12:26 UTC (rev 1602)
+++ trunk/refman-5.0/connector-mxj.xml	2006-03-16 15:06:07 UTC (rev 1603)
@@ -438,7 +438,7 @@
     <title>Running within a Java Object</title>
 
     <para>
-      Have a java application and wish to <quote>embed</quote> a MySQL
+      If you have a java application and wish to <quote>embed</quote> a MySQL
       database, make use of the com.mysql.management.MysqldResource
       class directly. This class may be instantiated with the default
       (no argument) constructor, or by passing in a java.io.File object
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      The MysqldResource will allow you to "start" MySQL with a
+      The MysqldResource enables you to "start" MySQL with a
       java.util.Map of server options which you provide, as well as
       "shutdown" the database. The following example shows a simplistic
       way to embed MySQL in an application using plain java objects:

Modified: trunk/refman-5.1/connector-mxj.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.1/connector-mxj.xml	2006-03-16 14:12:26 UTC (rev 1602)
+++ trunk/refman-5.1/connector-mxj.xml	2006-03-16 15:06:07 UTC (rev 1603)
@@ -438,7 +438,7 @@
     <title>Running within a Java Object</title>
 
     <para>
-      Have a java application and wish to <quote>embed</quote> a MySQL
+      If you have a java application and wish to <quote>embed</quote> a MySQL
       database, make use of the com.mysql.management.MysqldResource
       class directly. This class may be instantiated with the default
       (no argument) constructor, or by passing in a java.io.File object
@@ -448,13 +448,13 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      Once instantiated, a java.util.Map, the object will be able to
-      provide a java.util.Map of server options appropriate for the
+      Once instantiated, the object will be able to
+      provide a java.util.Map object of server options appropriate for the
       platform and version of MySQL which you will be using.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      The MysqldResource will allow you to "start" MySQL with a
+      The MysqldResource enables you to "start" MySQL with a
       java.util.Map of server options which you provide, as well as
       "shutdown" the database. The following example shows a simplistic
       way to embed MySQL in an application using plain java objects: