svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r8041 - in trunk: refman-5.0 refman-common

[jon]

Author: jstephens
Date: 2007-10-09 21:08:57 +0200 (Tue, 09 Oct 2007)
New Revision: 8041

Log:

Got rid of redundant sentences in 5.0 changelog entries and template.



Modified:
   trunk/refman-5.0/releasenotes-es-5.0.xml
   trunk/refman-common/TEMPLATE.news.xml


Modified: trunk/refman-5.0/releasenotes-es-5.0.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.0/releasenotes-es-5.0.xml	2007-10-09 19:00:08 UTC (rev 8040)
+++ trunk/refman-5.0/releasenotes-es-5.0.xml	2007-10-09 19:08:57 UTC (rev 8041)
Changed blocks: 3, Lines Added: 24, Lines Deleted: 32; 3927 bytes

@@ -42,21 +42,16 @@
 
     <para>
       This section documents all changes and bugfixes that have been
-      applied since the last official MySQL release. If you would like
-      to receive more fine-grained and personalized <emphasis>update
-      alerts</emphasis> about fixes that are relevant to the version and
-      features you use, please consider subscribing to <emphasis>MySQL
-      Enterprise</emphasis> (a commercial MySQL offering). For more
-      details please see
+      applied since the last MySQL Enterprise Server release (5.0.48).
+      If you would like to receive more fine-grained and personalized
+      <emphasis>update alerts</emphasis> about fixes that are relevant
+      to the version and features you use, please consider subscribing
+      to <emphasis>MySQL Enterprise</emphasis> (a commercial MySQL
+      offering). For more details please see
       <ulink url="&base-url-enterprise;advisors.html"/>.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      This section documents all changes and bug fixes that have been
-      applied since the last MySQL Enterprise Server release (5.0.48).
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
       Functionality added or changed:
     </para>
 

@@ -285,19 +280,21 @@
 
     <para>
       This section documents all changes and bugfixes that have been
-      applied since the last official MySQL release. If you would like
-      to receive more fine-grained and personalized <emphasis>update
-      alerts</emphasis> about fixes that are relevant to the version and
-      features you use, please consider subscribing to <emphasis>MySQL
-      Enterprise</emphasis> (a commercial MySQL offering). For more
-      details please see
+      applied since the last last MySQL Enterprise Server release
+      (5.0.46). If you would like to receive more fine-grained and
+      personalized <emphasis>update alerts</emphasis> about fixes that
+      are relevant to the version and features you use, please consider
+      subscribing to <emphasis>MySQL Enterprise</emphasis> (a commercial
+      MySQL offering). For more details please see
       <ulink url="&base-url-enterprise;advisors.html"/>.
     </para>
 
-    <para>
-      This section documents all changes and bug fixes that have been
-      applied since the last MySQL Enterprise Server release (5.0.46).
-    </para>
+    <important>
+      <para>
+        This release was withdrawn from production and is no longer
+        available.
+      </para>
+    </important>
 
     <para>
       Functionality added or changed:

@@ -1178,21 +1175,16 @@
 
     <para>
       This section documents all changes and bugfixes that have been
-      applied since the last official MySQL release. If you would like
-      to receive more fine-grained and personalized <emphasis>update
-      alerts</emphasis> about fixes that are relevant to the version and
-      features you use, please consider subscribing to <emphasis>MySQL
-      Enterprise</emphasis> (a commercial MySQL offering). For more
-      details please see
+      applied since the last MySQL Enterprise Server release (5.0.44).
+      If you would like to receive more fine-grained and personalized
+      <emphasis>update alerts</emphasis> about fixes that are relevant
+      to the version and features you use, please consider subscribing
+      to <emphasis>MySQL Enterprise</emphasis> (a commercial MySQL
+      offering). For more details please see
       <ulink url="&base-url-enterprise;advisors.html"/>.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      This section documents all changes and bug fixes that have been
-      applied since the last MySQL Enterprise Server release (5.0.44).
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
       Functionality added or changed:
     </para>
 


Modified: trunk/refman-common/TEMPLATE.news.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-common/TEMPLATE.news.xml	2007-10-09 19:00:08 UTC (rev 8040)
+++ trunk/refman-common/TEMPLATE.news.xml	2007-10-09 19:08:57 UTC (rev 8041)
Changed blocks: 1, Lines Added: 16, Lines Deleted: 21; 2127 bytes

@@ -60,32 +60,27 @@
     </remark>
   </para>
 
-  <para>
+  <remark>
+    If Enterprise Release, delete the first sentence in the following
+    paragraph and replace "major.minor.version-2" in the second sentence
+    with the version number of the *previous* Enterprise release.
+    Otherwise, delete the second sentence.
+  </remark>
+
+  <para role="release">
     This section documents all changes and bug fixes that have been
-    applied since the last official MySQL release. If you would like to
-    receive more fine-grained and personalized <emphasis>update
-    alerts</emphasis> about fixes that are relevant to the version and
-    features you use, please consider subscribing to <emphasis>MySQL
-    Enterprise</emphasis> (a commercial MySQL offering). For more
-    details please see
+    applied since the last official MySQL release. This section
+    documents all changes and bug fixes that have been applied since the
+    last MySQL Enterprise Server release (major.minor.version-2). If you
+    would like to receive more fine-grained and personalized
+    <emphasis>update alerts</emphasis> about fixes that are relevant to
+    the version and features you use, please consider subscribing to
+    <emphasis>MySQL Enterprise</emphasis> (a commercial MySQL offering).
+    For more details please see
     <ulink url="&base-url-enterprise;advisors.html"/>.
   </para>
 
-  <para role="release-es">
-    <remark>
-      If Enterprise Release, replace "major.minor.version-2" in the
-      following paragraph with the version number of the *previous*
-      Enterprise release. Otherwise, delete the paragraph.
-    </remark>
-  </para>
-
   <para>
-    This section documents all changes and bug fixes that have been
-    applied since the last MySQL Enterprise Server release
-    (major.minor.version-2).
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
     Functionality added or changed:
   </para>