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From:mcbrown Date:October 2 2007 11:27am
Subject:svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r7936 - trunk/refman-common
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Author: mcbrown
Date: 2007-10-02 11:27:04 +0200 (Tue, 02 Oct 2007)
New Revision: 7936

Log:
Fixing some typos (thanks Paul!)



Modified:
   trunk/refman-common/replication-drbd.xml


Modified: trunk/refman-common/replication-drbd.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-common/replication-drbd.xml	2007-10-01 19:58:51 UTC (rev 7935)
+++ trunk/refman-common/replication-drbd.xml	2007-10-02 09:27:04 UTC (rev 7936)
Changed blocks: 4, Lines Added: 5, Lines Deleted: 10; 1705 bytes

@@ -64,12 +64,6 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    In this section we will cover the basics of setting up a DRBD based
-    solution, how to combine this with Linux Heartbeat and at solutions
-    and topologies that make combine DRBD and MySQL Replication.
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
     For information on how to configure DRBD and MySQL, including
     Heartbeat support, see <xref linkend="replication-drbd-install"/>.
   </para>

@@ -381,7 +375,8 @@
       </itemizedlist>
 
       <para>
-        Before you compile or install DRBD, you must make
+        Before you compile or install DRBD, you must make sure the
+        following tools and files are in place:
       </para>
 
       <itemizedlist>

@@ -651,8 +646,8 @@
         <para>
           To follow the configuration, the sequence below shows only the
           changes from the default <filename>drbd.conf</filename> file.
-          Configurations within the file can be both global, and tied to
-          specific resource (
+          Configurations within the file can be both global or tied to
+          specific resource.
         </para>
 
         <orderedlist>

@@ -922,7 +917,7 @@
         <para>
           Once the primary and secondary machines are configured and
           synchronized, you can get the status information about your
-          DRBD device is to view the output from
+          DRBD device by viewing the output from
           <filename>/proc/drbd</filename>:
         </para>
 


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