svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r7080 - trunk/refman-5.1

[jon]

Author: jstephens
Date: 2007-07-11 10:59:12 +0200 (Wed, 11 Jul 2007)
New Revision: 7080

Log:

Couple of wording changes/additions inspired by Stewart.



Modified:
   trunk/refman-5.1/mysql-cluster.xml


Modified: trunk/refman-5.1/mysql-cluster.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.1/mysql-cluster.xml	2007-07-11 03:53:26 UTC (rev 7079)
+++ trunk/refman-5.1/mysql-cluster.xml	2007-07-11 08:59:12 UTC (rev 7080)
Changed blocks: 2, Lines Added: 12, Lines Deleted: 5; 1509 bytes

@@ -684,11 +684,16 @@
     <para>
       &mccge-series; is a branch of MySQL 5.1 using advanced versions of
       the <literal>NDB</literal> storage engine and
-      <literal>NDB</literal> API. It is intended for use in the
-      telcommunications industry, and is available in binary and source
-      form to commercial customers. Two development trees can also be
-      accessed via <ulink url="http://mysql.bkbits.net/"/>:
+      <literal>NDB</literal> API, created as a direct response to
+      customer needs. It is intended for use in the telcommunications
+      industry, and is available in binary and source form to commercial
+      customers.
+    </para>
 
+    <para>
+      Two development trees can also be accessed via
+      <ulink url="http://mysql.bkbits.net/"/>:
+
       <itemizedlist>
 
         <listitem>

@@ -740,7 +745,9 @@
       development, with the ndb-6.1.<replaceable>x</replaceable> series
       intended for use by telecommunications customers and
       ndb-6.2.<replaceable>x</replaceable> intended for testing
-      purposes.
+      purposes. Differences between the mainline MySQL &current-series;
+      series and &mccge-series; are higlighted in
+      <xref linkend="mysql-cluster-cge-differences"/>.
     </para>
 
     <formalpara>