svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r6443 - trunk/userguide

[plavin]

Author: plavin
Date: 2007-05-14 16:34:14 +0200 (Mon, 14 May 2007)
New Revision: 6443

Log:
Minor corrections

Modified:
   trunk/userguide/mysqladmin.xml


Modified: trunk/userguide/mysqladmin.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/userguide/mysqladmin.xml	2007-05-14 13:43:11 UTC (rev 6442)
+++ trunk/userguide/mysqladmin.xml	2007-05-14 14:34:14 UTC (rev 6443)
Changed blocks: 6, Lines Added: 8, Lines Deleted: 7; 2276 bytes

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    As is the case with most MySQL utilities, there are often other
+    As is the case with most MySQL utilities, there are often
     alternatives to using <command>mysqladmin</command>. The GUI Tool,
     MySQL Administrator, for example, can do most of the tasks performed
     by <command>mysqladmin</command> and is a very useful administrative

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
     category. <command>mysqladmin</command> offers a convenient
     alternative that allows you to perform common tasks quickly from the
     command line without starting up a GUI application or the MySQL
-    client. This chapter shows to use <command>mysqladmin</command> for
+    client. This chapter shows how to use <command>mysqladmin</command> for
     these kinds of tasks. It is not meant as a definite treatment of
     <command>mysqladmin</command>; for complete coverage of this utility
     see <ulink url="&base-url-refman;5.0/en/mysqladmin.html"/>. The more

@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@
       exactly the same way for all the MySQL programs.
     </para>
 
-    <section>
+    <section id="mysqladmin-shutdown">
 
       <title>Shutting Down the Server</title>
 

@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@
 
     </section>
 
-    <section>
+    <section id="mysqladmin-create">
 
       <title>Creating and Dropping Databases</title>
 

@@ -219,8 +219,9 @@
       <title>Checking that the Server is Running</title>
 
       <para>
-        If your MySQL server is running, go to the command line and
-        issue the command:
+        The <command>ping</command> command is an easy way
+        to determine if your MySQL server is running.
+        To test this command, do the following:
       </para>
 
 <programlisting>

@@ -257,7 +258,7 @@
         Familiarize yourself with these error messages because you will
         see them again &mdash; but probably by accident and not, as in
         this case, by design. In most situations, these errors indicate
-        that the MySQL server is not running
+        that the MySQL server is not running. 
       </para>
 
       <para>