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From:paul Date:April 24 2007 8:55pm
Subject:svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r6168 - in trunk: . refman-4.1 refman-5.0 refman-5.1
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Author: paul
Date: 2007-04-24 20:55:53 +0200 (Tue, 24 Apr 2007)
New Revision: 6168

Log:
 r24042@polar:  paul | 2007-04-24 13:19:20 -0500
 Kill some todo's, no-longer-relevant remarks.


Modified:
   trunk/refman-4.1/preface.xml
   trunk/refman-5.0/preface.xml
   trunk/refman-5.1/preface.xml

Property changes on: trunk
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Name: svk:merge
   - 4767c598-dc10-0410-bea0-d01b485662eb:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:24040
7d8d2c4e-af1d-0410-ab9f-b038ce55645b:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc:19584
b5ec3a16-e900-0410-9ad2-d183a3acac99:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:14218
bf112a9c-6c03-0410-a055-ad865cd57414:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:14593
   + 4767c598-dc10-0410-bea0-d01b485662eb:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:24042
7d8d2c4e-af1d-0410-ab9f-b038ce55645b:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc:19584
b5ec3a16-e900-0410-9ad2-d183a3acac99:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:14218
bf112a9c-6c03-0410-a055-ad865cd57414:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:14593


Modified: trunk/refman-4.1/preface.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-4.1/preface.xml	2007-04-24 18:28:41 UTC (rev 6167)
+++ trunk/refman-4.1/preface.xml	2007-04-24 18:55:53 UTC (rev 6168)
Changed blocks: 1, Lines Added: 2, Lines Deleted: 19; 1328 bytes

@@ -14,25 +14,8 @@
     System through version &current-version;. It is applicable for older
     versions of the MySQL software (such as 3.23 or 4.0-production)
     because functional changes are indicated with reference to a version
-    number.
-
-    <remark>
-      Update following as appropriate.
-    </remark>
-
-    For later MySQL releases, see the appropriately-numbered edition of
-    this manual.
+    number. For later MySQL releases, see the appropriately-numbered
+    edition of this manual.
   </para>
 
-  <remark>
-    Copyright &copy;1997-2007 TcX AB, Detron HB and MySQL Finland AB
-    This manual is NOT distributed under a GPL style license. Use of the
-    manual is subject to the following terms: - Conversion to other
-    formats is allowed, but the actual content may not be altered or
-    edited in any way. - You may create a printed copy for your own
-    personal use. - For all other uses, such as selling printed copies
-    or using the manual in whole or in part within another publication,
-    prior written agreement from MySQL AB is required.
-  </remark>
-
 </preface>


Modified: trunk/refman-5.0/preface.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.0/preface.xml	2007-04-24 18:28:41 UTC (rev 6167)
+++ trunk/refman-5.0/preface.xml	2007-04-24 18:55:53 UTC (rev 6168)
Changed blocks: 1, Lines Added: 10, Lines Deleted: 24; 2339 bytes

@@ -9,36 +9,22 @@
 
   <title>Preface</title>
 
+  <remark role="note">
+    Next para also appears in introduction.xml
+  </remark>
+
   <para>
     This is the Reference Manual for the MySQL Database System, version
-    &current-series;, up to release &current-version;. It is not
+    &current-series;, through release &current-version;. It is not
     intended for use with older versions of the MySQL software due to
     the many functional and other differences between MySQL
-    &current-series; and previous versions.
-
-    <remark role="todo">
-      Update next sentence with a link when it's been determined how
-      this should be handled. Likely to be something like
-      &base-url-docs;en/4-1/ ?
-    </remark>
-
-    If you are using an earlier release of the MySQL software, please
-    refer to the <citetitle>&title-refman-previous;</citetitle>, which
-    provides coverage of the 3.22, 3.23, 4.0, and 4.1 series of MySQL
-    software releases. Differences between minor versions of MySQL
+    &current-series; and previous versions. If you are using a version
+    &previous-series; release of the MySQL software, please refer to the
+    <ulink url="&base-url-refman;/&previous-series;/en/"><citetitle>&title-refman-previous;</citetitle></ulink>,
+    which covers the 3.23, 4.0, and 4.1 series of MySQL software
+    releases. Differences between minor versions of MySQL
     &current-series; are noted in the present text with reference to
     release numbers (&current-series;.<replaceable>x</replaceable>).
   </para>
 
-  <remark>
-    Copyright &copy;1997-2007 TcX AB, Detron HB and MySQL Finland AB
-    This manual is NOT distributed under a GPL style license. Use of the
-    manual is subject to the following terms: - Conversion to other
-    formats is allowed, but the actual content may not be altered or
-    edited in any way. - You may create a printed copy for your own
-    personal use. - For all other uses, such as selling printed copies
-    or using the manual in whole or in part within another publication,
-    prior written agreement from MySQL AB is required.
-  </remark>
-
 </preface>


Modified: trunk/refman-5.1/preface.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.1/preface.xml	2007-04-24 18:28:41 UTC (rev 6167)
+++ trunk/refman-5.1/preface.xml	2007-04-24 18:55:53 UTC (rev 6168)
Changed blocks: 1, Lines Added: 15, Lines Deleted: 27; 2708 bytes

@@ -9,38 +9,26 @@
 
   <title>Preface</title>
 
+  <remark role="note">
+    Next para also appears in introduction.xml
+  </remark>
+
   <para>
     This is the Reference Manual for the MySQL Database System, version
-    &current-series;, up to release &current-version;. It is not
+    &current-series;, through release &current-version;. It is not
     intended for use with older versions of the MySQL software due to
     the many functional and other differences between MySQL
-    &current-series; and previous versions.
-
-    <remark role="todo">
-      Update next sentence with a link when it's been determined how
-      this should be handled. Likely to be something like
-      &base-url-docs;en/4-1/ ?
-    </remark>
-
-    If you are using an earlier release of the MySQL software, please
-    refer to the <citetitle>&title-refman-previous;</citetitle>, which
-    provides coverage of MySQL &previous-series;, or to the
-    <citetitle>MySQL 3.23, 4.0, 4.1 Reference Manual</citetitle>, which
-    covers MySQL 4.1 and all earlier versions of MySQL. Differences
-    between minor versions of MySQL &current-series; are noted in the
-    present text with reference to release numbers
+    &current-series; and previous versions. If you are using an earlier
+    release of the MySQL software, please refer to the
+    <ulink url="&base-url-refman;/&previous-series;/en/"><citetitle>&title-refman-previous;</citetitle></ulink>,
+    which covers the &previous-series; series of MySQL software
+    releases, or to
+    <ulink url="&base-url-refman;/4.1/en/"><citetitle>MySQL 3.23, 4.0,
+    4.1 Reference Manual</citetitle></ulink>, which covers the 3.23,
+    4.0, and 4.1 series of MySQL software releases. Differences between
+    minor versions of MySQL &current-series; are noted in the present
+    text with reference to release numbers
     (&current-series;.<replaceable>x</replaceable>).
   </para>
 
-  <remark>
-    Copyright &copy;1997-2007 TcX AB, Detron HB, and MySQL Finland AB
-    This manual is NOT distributed under a GPL style license. Use of the
-    manual is subject to the following terms: - Conversion to other
-    formats is allowed, but the actual content may not be altered or
-    edited in any way. - You may create a printed copy for your own
-    personal use. - For all other uses, such as selling printed copies
-    or using the manual in whole or in part within another publication,
-    prior written agreement from MySQL AB is required.
-  </remark>
-
 </preface>


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