From: jon
Date: February 1 2006 8:54am
Subject: svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r1163 - in trunk: refman-4.1 refman-5.0 refman-5.1
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Author: jstephens
Date: 2006-02-01 09:54:58 +0100 (Wed, 01 Feb 2006)
New Revision: 1163

Log:

Fixed a couple more glitches uncovered by Paul in the Cluster chapter.



Modified:
   trunk/refman-4.1/ndbcluster.xml
   trunk/refman-5.0/ndbcluster.xml
   trunk/refman-5.1/ndbcluster.xml

Modified: trunk/refman-4.1/ndbcluster.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-4.1/ndbcluster.xml	2006-02-01 03:26:29 UTC (rev 1162)
+++ trunk/refman-4.1/ndbcluster.xml	2006-02-01 08:54:58 UTC (rev 1163)
@@ -2823,7 +2823,7 @@
           indicate units of 1024, 1024&times;1024, or
           1024&times;1024&times;1024. (For example,
           <literal>100K</literal> means 100 &times; 1024 = 102400.)
-          Parameters and values are currently case-sensitive.
+          Parameter names and values are currently case-sensitive.
         </para>
 
         <itemizedlist>
@@ -2859,10 +2859,10 @@
             <para>
               Specifying this parameter has an effect similar to
               specifying <literal>ExecuteOnComputer</literal>. It
-              defines the hostname of the computer the storage node on
-              which is to reside. To specify a hostname other than
+              defines the hostname of the computer on which the storage
+              node is to reside. To specify a hostname other than
               <literal>localhost</literal>, either this parameter or
-              <literal>ExecuteOnComputer</literal> is required..
+              <literal>ExecuteOnComputer</literal> is required.
             </para>
           </listitem>
 

Modified: trunk/refman-5.0/ndbcluster.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.0/ndbcluster.xml	2006-02-01 03:26:29 UTC (rev 1162)
+++ trunk/refman-5.0/ndbcluster.xml	2006-02-01 08:54:58 UTC (rev 1163)
@@ -2814,7 +2814,7 @@
           indicate units of 1024, 1024&times;1024, or
           1024&times;1024&times;1024. (For example,
           <literal>100K</literal> means 100 &times; 1024 = 102400.)
-          Parameters and values are currently case-sensitive.
+          Parameter names and values are currently case-sensitive.
         </para>
 
         <itemizedlist>
@@ -2850,10 +2850,10 @@
             <para>
               Specifying this parameter has an effect similar to
               specifying <literal>ExecuteOnComputer</literal>. It
-              defines the hostname of the computer the storage node on
-              which is to reside. To specify a hostname other than
+              defines the hostname of the computer on which the storage
+              node is to reside. To specify a hostname other than
               <literal>localhost</literal>, either this parameter or
-              <literal>ExecuteOnComputer</literal> is required..
+              <literal>ExecuteOnComputer</literal> is required.
             </para>
           </listitem>
 

Modified: trunk/refman-5.1/ndbcluster.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.1/ndbcluster.xml	2006-02-01 03:26:29 UTC (rev 1162)
+++ trunk/refman-5.1/ndbcluster.xml	2006-02-01 08:54:58 UTC (rev 1163)
@@ -2812,7 +2812,7 @@
           indicate units of 1024, 1024&times;1024, or
           1024&times;1024&times;1024. (For example,
           <literal>100K</literal> means 100 &times; 1024 = 102400.)
-          Parameters and values are currently case-sensitive.
+          Parameter names and values are currently case-sensitive.
         </para>
 
         <itemizedlist>
@@ -2848,8 +2848,8 @@
             <para>
               Specifying this parameter has an effect similar to
               specifying <literal>ExecuteOnComputer</literal>. It
-              defines the hostname of the computer the storage node on
-              which is to reside. To specify a hostname other than
+              defines the hostname of the computer on which the storage
+              node is to reside. To specify a hostname other than
               <literal>localhost</literal>, either this parameter or
               <literal>ExecuteOnComputer</literal> is required..
             </para>