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From:paul Date:December 5 2006 8:11pm
Subject:svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r4114 - in trunk: . refman-4.1 refman-5.0 refman-5.1
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Author: paul
Date: 2006-12-05 21:11:29 +0100 (Tue, 05 Dec 2006)
New Revision: 4114

Log:
 r16706@polar:  paul | 2006-12-05 13:56:31 -0600
 Remove a few todos.


Modified:
   trunk/refman-4.1/introduction.xml
   trunk/refman-4.1/versions.ent
   trunk/refman-5.0/introduction.xml
   trunk/refman-5.1/introduction.xml

Property changes on: trunk
___________________________________________________________________
Name: svk:merge
   - 4767c598-dc10-0410-bea0-d01b485662eb:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:16705
7d8d2c4e-af1d-0410-ab9f-b038ce55645b:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc:13158
b5ec3a16-e900-0410-9ad2-d183a3acac99:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:14218
bf112a9c-6c03-0410-a055-ad865cd57414:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:12611
   + 4767c598-dc10-0410-bea0-d01b485662eb:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:16706
7d8d2c4e-af1d-0410-ab9f-b038ce55645b:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc:13158
b5ec3a16-e900-0410-9ad2-d183a3acac99:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:14218
bf112a9c-6c03-0410-a055-ad865cd57414:/mysqldoc-local/mysqldoc/trunk:12611


Modified: trunk/refman-4.1/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-4.1/introduction.xml	2006-12-05 20:11:10 UTC (rev 4113)
+++ trunk/refman-4.1/introduction.xml	2006-12-05 20:11:29 UTC (rev 4114)
Changed blocks: 3, Lines Added: 9, Lines Deleted: 20; 2216 bytes

@@ -172,14 +172,10 @@
       &current-version;. It is also applicable for versions of the MySQL
       software previous to &current-series; (such as 3.23 or 4.0)
       because functional changes are indicated with reference to version
-      numbers.
-
-      <remark role="todo">
-        Update following as appropriate.
-      </remark>
-
-      For later MySQL releases, see the appropriately-numbered edition
-      of this manual.
+      numbers. For later MySQL releases, see the appropriately-numbered
+      edition of this manual. For example, if you are using a version
+      &next-series; release of the MySQL software, please refer to the
+      <ulink url="&base-url-refman;/&next-series;/en/"><citetitle>&title-refman-next;</citetitle></ulink>.
     </para>
 
     <para>

@@ -212,11 +208,6 @@
       format. The HTML version and other formats are produced
       automatically, primarily using the DocBook XSL stylesheets. For
       information about DocBook, see <ulink url="http://docbook.org/"/>
-
-      <remark role="todo">
-        [SH] We might want to add details about creating CHM, PDF, INFO,
-        ...
-      </remark>
     </para>
 
     <para>

@@ -231,15 +222,13 @@
 </programlisting>
 
     <para>
-      If you have any suggestions concerning additions or corrections to
-      this manual, please send them to the documentation team at
-      <email>docs@stripped</email>.
+      If you have questions about using MySQL, you can ask them using
+      our mailing lists or forums. See <xref linkend="mailing-lists"/>,
+      and <xref linkend="forums"/>. If you have suggestions concerning
+      additions or corrections to the manual itself, please send them to
+      the documentation team at <email>docs@stripped</email>.
     </para>
 
-    <remark role="todo">
-      Update following as appropriate.
-    </remark>
-
     <para>
       This manual was originally written by David Axmark and Michael
       <quote>Monty</quote> Widenius. It is maintained by the MySQL


Modified: trunk/refman-4.1/versions.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-4.1/versions.ent	2006-12-05 20:11:10 UTC (rev 4113)
+++ trunk/refman-4.1/versions.ent	2006-12-05 20:11:29 UTC (rev 4114)
Changed blocks: 1, Lines Added: 2, Lines Deleted: 0; 742 bytes

@@ -3,7 +3,9 @@
   This file contains only entities for which the value varies per
   version of the manual.
 -->
+<!ENTITY title-refman-next "MySQL 5.0 Reference Manual"><!-- Title of Manual next edition  -->
 <!ENTITY current-series "4.1"><!-- Current MySQL release series  -->
 <!ENTITY previous-series "4.0"><!-- Previous MySQL release series  -->
+<!ENTITY next-series "5.0"><!-- Next MySQL release series  -->
 <!ENTITY current-version "4.1.22"><!-- Latest 4.1.x Version - update with new releases -->
 


Modified: trunk/refman-5.0/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.0/introduction.xml	2006-12-05 20:11:10 UTC (rev 4113)
+++ trunk/refman-5.0/introduction.xml	2006-12-05 20:11:29 UTC (rev 4114)
Changed blocks: 3, Lines Added: 13, Lines Deleted: 27; 2925 bytes

@@ -185,21 +185,14 @@
       version &current-series;, through release &current-version;. It is
       not intended for use with older versions of the MySQL software due
       to the many functional and other differences between MySQL
-      &current-series; and previous versions.
-
-      <remark role="todo">
-        Update next sentence with a link when it's been determined how
-        this should be handled. Likely to be something like
-        &base-url-docs;en/4-1/ ?
-      </remark>
-
-      If you are using a version &previous-series; release of the MySQL
-      software, please refer to the
-      <citetitle>&title-refman-previous;</citetitle>, which covers the
-      3.23, 4.0, and 4.1 series of MySQL software releases. Differences
-      between minor versions of MySQL &current-series; are noted in the
-      present text with reference to release numbers
-      (&current-series;.<replaceable>x</replaceable>).
+      &current-series; and previous versions. If you are using a version
+      &previous-series; release of the MySQL software, please refer to
+      the
+      <ulink url="&base-url-refman;/&previous-series;/en/"><citetitle>&title-refman-previous;</citetitle></ulink>,
+      which covers the 3.23, 4.0, and 4.1 series of MySQL software
+      releases. Differences between minor versions of MySQL
+      &current-series; are noted in the present text with reference to
+      release numbers (&current-series;.<replaceable>x</replaceable>).
     </para>
 
     <para>

@@ -232,11 +225,6 @@
       format. The HTML version and other formats are produced
       automatically, primarily using the DocBook XSL stylesheets. For
       information about DocBook, see <ulink url="http://docbook.org/"/>
-
-      <remark role="todo">
-        [SH] We might want to add details about creating CHM, PDF, INFO,
-        ...
-      </remark>
     </para>
 
     <para>

@@ -251,15 +239,13 @@
 </programlisting>
 
     <para>
-      If you have any suggestions concerning additions or corrections to
-      this manual, please send them to the documentation team at
-      <email>docs@stripped</email>.
+      If you have questions about using MySQL, you can ask them using
+      our mailing lists or forums. See <xref linkend="mailing-lists"/>,
+      and <xref linkend="forums"/>. If you have suggestions concerning
+      additions or corrections to the manual itself, please send them to
+      the documentation team at <email>docs@stripped</email>.
     </para>
 
-    <remark role="todo">
-      Update following as appropriate.
-    </remark>
-
     <para>
       This manual was originally written by David Axmark and Michael
       <quote>Monty</quote> Widenius. It is maintained by the MySQL


Modified: trunk/refman-5.1/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.1/introduction.xml	2006-12-05 20:11:10 UTC (rev 4113)
+++ trunk/refman-5.1/introduction.xml	2006-12-05 20:11:29 UTC (rev 4114)
Changed blocks: 3, Lines Added: 16, Lines Deleted: 28; 3238 bytes

@@ -185,22 +185,17 @@
       version &current-series;, through release &current-version;. It is
       not intended for use with older versions of the MySQL software due
       to the many functional and other differences between MySQL
-      &current-series; and previous versions.
-
-      <remark role="todo">
-        Update next sentence with a link when it's been determined how
-        this should be handled. Likely to be something like
-        &base-url-docs;en/4-1/ ?
-      </remark>
-
-      If you are using an earlier release of the MySQL software, please
-      refer to the <citetitle>&title-refman-previous;</citetitle>, which
-      covers the &previous-series; series of MySQL software releases, or
-      to <citetitle>MySQL 3.23, 4.0, 4.1 Reference Manual</citetitle>,
-      which covers the 3.23, 4.0, and 4.1 series of MySQL software
-      releases. Differences between minor versions of MySQL
-      &current-series; are noted in the present text with reference to
-      release numbers (&current-series;.<replaceable>x</replaceable>).
+      &current-series; and previous versions. If you are using an
+      earlier release of the MySQL software, please refer to the
+      <ulink url="&base-url-refman;/&previous-series;/en/"><citetitle>&title-refman-previous;</citetitle></ulink>,
+      which covers the &previous-series; series of MySQL software
+      releases, or to
+      <ulink url="&base-url-refman;/4.1/en/"><citetitle>MySQL 3.23, 4.0,
+      4.1 Reference Manual</citetitle></ulink>, which covers the 3.23,
+      4.0, and 4.1 series of MySQL software releases. Differences
+      between minor versions of MySQL &current-series; are noted in the
+      present text with reference to release numbers
+      (&current-series;.<replaceable>x</replaceable>).
     </para>
 
     <para>

@@ -233,11 +228,6 @@
       format. The HTML version and other formats are produced
       automatically, primarily using the DocBook XSL stylesheets. For
       information about DocBook, see <ulink url="http://docbook.org/"/>
-
-      <remark role="todo">
-        [SH] We might want to add details about creating CHM, PDF, INFO,
-        ...
-      </remark>
     </para>
 
     <para>

@@ -252,15 +242,13 @@
 </programlisting>
 
     <para>
-      If you have any suggestions concerning additions or corrections to
-      this manual, please send them to the documentation team at
-      <email>docs@stripped</email>.
+      If you have questions about using MySQL, you can ask them using
+      our mailing lists or forums. See <xref linkend="mailing-lists"/>,
+      and <xref linkend="forums"/>. If you have suggestions concerning
+      additions or corrections to the manual itself, please send them to
+      the documentation team at <email>docs@stripped</email>.
     </para>
 
-    <remark role="todo">
-      Update following as appropriate.
-    </remark>
-
     <para>
       This manual was originally written by David Axmark and Michael
       <quote>Monty</quote> Widenius. It is maintained by the MySQL


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