Author: mcbrown
Date: 2006-11-28 14:14:48 +0100 (Tue, 28 Nov 2006)
New Revision: 4057
Log:
Some minor edits to Falcon (from Calvin)
Fixing the SQL Syntax wording for subqueries based on Paul's comment on the DB Handbook chapter
Modified:
trunk/refman-4.1/sql-syntax.xml
trunk/refman-5.0/sql-syntax.xml
trunk/refman-5.1/se-falcon.xml
trunk/refman-5.1/sql-syntax.xml
Modified: trunk/refman-4.1/sql-syntax.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-4.1/sql-syntax.xml 2006-11-28 03:37:53 UTC (rev 4056)
+++ trunk/refman-4.1/sql-syntax.xml 2006-11-28 13:14:48 UTC (rev 4057)
Changed blocks: 2, Lines Added: 6, Lines Deleted: 6; 1327 bytes
@@ -7877,10 +7877,10 @@
<listitem>
<para>
- They are, in many people's opinion, readable. Indeed, it was
- the innovation of subqueries that gave people the original
- idea of calling the early SQL <quote>Structured Query
- Language.</quote>
+ They are, in many people's opinion, more readable than
+ complex joins and/or unions. Indeed, it was the innovation
+ of subqueries that gave people the original idea of calling
+ the early SQL <quote>Structured Query Language.</quote>
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -12765,8 +12765,8 @@
<literal>OPTIMIZE TABLE</literal> works
<emphasis>only</emphasis> for <literal>MyISAM</literal>,
<literal>BDB</literal>, and <literal>InnoDB</literal> tables.
- It does <emphasis>not</emphasis> work for tables created
- using any other storage engine.
+ It does <emphasis>not</emphasis> work for tables created using
+ any other storage engine.
</para>
<para>
Modified: trunk/refman-5.0/sql-syntax.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.0/sql-syntax.xml 2006-11-28 03:37:53 UTC (rev 4056)
+++ trunk/refman-5.0/sql-syntax.xml 2006-11-28 13:14:48 UTC (rev 4057)
Changed blocks: 2, Lines Added: 6, Lines Deleted: 6; 1327 bytes
@@ -8534,10 +8534,10 @@
<listitem>
<para>
- They are, in many people's opinion, readable. Indeed, it was
- the innovation of subqueries that gave people the original
- idea of calling the early SQL <quote>Structured Query
- Language.</quote>
+ They are, in many people's opinion, more readable than
+ complex joins and/or unions. Indeed, it was the innovation
+ of subqueries that gave people the original idea of calling
+ the early SQL <quote>Structured Query Language.</quote>
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -14321,8 +14321,8 @@
<literal>OPTIMIZE TABLE</literal> works
<emphasis>only</emphasis> for <literal>MyISAM</literal>,
<literal>BDB</literal>, and <literal>InnoDB</literal> tables.
- It does <emphasis>not</emphasis> work for tables created
- using any other storage engine.
+ It does <emphasis>not</emphasis> work for tables created using
+ any other storage engine.
</para>
<para>
Modified: trunk/refman-5.1/se-falcon.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.1/se-falcon.xml 2006-11-28 03:37:53 UTC (rev 4056)
+++ trunk/refman-5.1/se-falcon.xml 2006-11-28 13:14:48 UTC (rev 4057)
Changed blocks: 4, Lines Added: 8, Lines Deleted: 5; 1309 bytes
@@ -41,8 +41,9 @@
</warning>
<para>
- Falcon is currently available only for the Windows and Linux
- operating systems running on either 32-bit or 64-bit architectures.
+ Falcon is currently available only for the 32-bit Windows and 32-bit
+ or 64-bit Linux operating systems. Additional platforms will be
+ added after the alpha release.
</para>
<section id="se-falcon-features">
@@ -330,7 +331,8 @@
</section>
<section id="se-falcon-createdb">
- <title>Creating the Falcon Tablespace</title>
+
+ <title>Creating the Falcon Tablespace</title>
&falcon-warning;
<para>
@@ -918,7 +920,7 @@
&falcon-warning;
<para>
There are a number of limits in the alpha release of Falcon; these
- will be addressed in forthcoming versions:
+ will be addressed in forthcoming releases:
</para>
<itemizedlist>
@@ -929,7 +931,8 @@
</para>
</listitem>
- <listitem><para>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
Serializable isolation levels are not supported.
</para>
</listitem>
Modified: trunk/refman-5.1/sql-syntax.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-5.1/sql-syntax.xml 2006-11-28 03:37:53 UTC (rev 4056)
+++ trunk/refman-5.1/sql-syntax.xml 2006-11-28 13:14:48 UTC (rev 4057)
Changed blocks: 1, Lines Added: 4, Lines Deleted: 4; 865 bytes
@@ -9905,10 +9905,10 @@
<listitem>
<para>
- They are, in many people's opinion, readable. Indeed, it was
- the innovation of subqueries that gave people the original
- idea of calling the early SQL <quote>Structured Query
- Language.</quote>
+ They are, in many people's opinion, more readable than
+ complex joins and/or unions. Indeed, it was the innovation
+ of subqueries that gave people the original idea of calling
+ the early SQL <quote>Structured Query Language.</quote>
</para>
</listitem>
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| • svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r4057 - in trunk: refman-4.1 refman-5.0 refman-5.1 | mcbrown | 28 Nov |
