svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r3880 - trunk/refman-5.0

[stefan]

Author: shinz
Date: 2006-11-08 13:09:46 +0100 (Wed, 08 Nov 2006)
New Revision: 3880

Log:
Review continued ...

Modified:
   trunk/refman-5.0/installing-es.xml


Modified: trunk/refman-5.0/installing-es.xml
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--- trunk/refman-5.0/installing-es.xml	2006-11-08 11:06:00 UTC (rev 3879)
+++ trunk/refman-5.0/installing-es.xml	2006-11-08 12:09:46 UTC (rev 3880)
Changed blocks: 11, Lines Added: 21, Lines Deleted: 22; 5385 bytes

@@ -576,15 +576,13 @@
         installed.
       </para>
       
-      <remark>[SH] Reviewed up to this point, 2006-11-07</remark>
-
       <section id="installing-es-installer-installation">
 
         <title>MySQL Enterprise Installation Process</title>
 
         <para>
           To install MySQL components, choose option 2 (Installation).
-          The main installation screen enables you select the type of
+          The main installation screen enables you to select the type of
           installation.
         </para>
 

@@ -604,26 +602,26 @@
           Four different installation options are available:
         </para>
 
-        <itemizedlist>
+        <orderedlist>
 
           <listitem>
             <para>
               <emphasis role="bold">Server Default</emphasis> &mdash;
               this installs all of the components required for running a
               MySQL database server, including the core server
-              application, command line utilities, the MySQL Client
-              Library and documentation. The MySQL GUI Tools and
-              Connectors are not installed with this option.
+              application, command line utilities, the MySQL client
+              library, and documentation. The MySQL GUI tools and
+              connectors are not installed with this option.
             </para>
           </listitem>
 
           <listitem>
             <para>
-              <emphasis role="bold">Client Default </emphasis> &mdash;
+              <emphasis role="bold">Client Default</emphasis> &mdash;
               this installs all of the components required for a client
               to communicate with a MySQL database server. This includes
-              the MySQL Client Library, GUI Tools, Connectors and
-              Documentation.
+              the MySQL client library, GUI tools, connectors, and
+              documentation.
             </para>
           </listitem>
 

@@ -631,8 +629,8 @@
             <para>
               <emphasis role="bold">Full</emphasis> &mdash; this
               installs all the available components, including MySQL
-              Database Server, Client Library, GUI Tools, Connectors and
-              Documentation.
+              database server, client library, GUI tools, connectors, and
+              documentation.
             </para>
           </listitem>
 

@@ -641,8 +639,8 @@
               <emphasis role="bold">Custom</emphasis> &mdash; this
               option enables you to select the individual components to
               be installed. You can choose not only the major groups
-              (for example MySQL Database Server) but also individual
-              sub components (command-line utilities). You will need to
+              (for example MySQL database server) but also individual
+              subcomponents (command-line utilities). You will need to
               select the individual components that you want to install.
             </para>
 

@@ -659,7 +657,7 @@
             </mediaobject>
           </listitem>
 
-        </itemizedlist>
+        </orderedlist>
 
         <para>
           These options are summarized in the table below.

@@ -765,7 +763,7 @@
 
         <para>
           Once the process has completed, you will need to click
-          <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to complete the post installation
+          <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to complete the post-installation
           process. You can choose to automatically execute the MySQL
           Server Configuration Wizard (which provides an interface for
           configuring the parameters of your MySQL Server installation)

@@ -780,8 +778,8 @@
             format="PNG"/>
           </imageobject>
           <textobject>
-            <phrase lang="en">MySQL Enterprise Installer Post
-            Installation tasks</phrase>
+            <phrase lang="en">MySQL Enterprise Installer
+            Post-Installation Tasks</phrase>
           </textobject>
         </mediaobject>
 

@@ -799,7 +797,7 @@
 
   <section id="installing-es-installer-postinstall">
 
-    <title>Post-install procedures</title>
+    <title>Post-Install Procedures</title>
 &es-only;
       <para>
       After installation, depending on the options you selected on the

@@ -827,7 +825,7 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      If you have selected that the MySQL Service Agent be installed
+      If you have selected that the MySQL Network Service Agent be installed
       automatically, you should follow the instructions below to install
       and configure the agent for your machine.
     </para>

@@ -870,12 +868,12 @@
           need to know the location of this directory so that you can
           start and stop the agent when required.
         </para>
-
+        <remark>[SH] Reviewed up to this point, 2006-11-08</remark>
         <para>
           The default location under Linux is within the
           <filename>/opt</filename> directory; under Windows the default
           location is within the main MySQL installation directory
-          (<filename>C:\Program
+          (for example, <filename>C:\Program
           Files\MySQL\MySQLNetwork\Agent</filename>).
         </para>
 

@@ -1460,3 +1458,4 @@
   </section>
 
 </section>
+