svn commit - mysqldoc@oter02: r26376 - in trunk: . refman-common

[paul.dubois]

Author: pd221994
Date: 2011-05-31 00:13:24 +0200 (Tue, 31 May 2011)
New Revision: 26376

Log:
 r48459@dhcp-adc-twvpn-1-vpnpool-10-154-26-89:  paul | 2011-05-28 21:07:46 -0500
 Remove extraneous commas


Modified:
   svk:merge
   trunk/refman-common/mysql-proxy-core.xml

Property changes on: trunk
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Modified: svk:merge
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Changed blocks: 0, Lines Added: 0, Lines Deleted: 0; 1277 bytes


Modified: trunk/refman-common/mysql-proxy-core.xml
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--- trunk/refman-common/mysql-proxy-core.xml	2011-05-30 15:47:06 UTC (rev 26375)
+++ trunk/refman-common/mysql-proxy-core.xml	2011-05-30 22:13:24 UTC (rev 26376)
Changed blocks: 3, Lines Added: 8, Lines Deleted: 7; 1606 bytes

@@ -87,7 +87,8 @@
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Linux (including Red Hat, Fedora, Debian, SuSE) and derivatives
+          Linux (including Red Hat, Fedora, Debian, SuSE) and
+          derivatives
         </para>
       </listitem>
 

@@ -1079,13 +1080,13 @@
 
         <para>
           When using the option within the configuration file, you
-          should separate multiple servers with a comma. The equivalent
-          of the preceding example would be:
+          should separate multiple servers by commas. The equivalent of
+          the preceding example would be:
         </para>
 
 <programlisting>
 ...
-proxy-read-only-backend-addresses = 192.168.0.1:3306, 192.168.0.2:3306
+proxy-read-only-backend-addresses = 192.168.0.1:3306,192.168.0.2:3306
 </programlisting>
       </listitem>
 

@@ -1120,13 +1121,13 @@
 
         <para>
           When using the option within the configuration file, you
-          should separate multiple servers with a comma. The equivalent
-          of the preceding example would be:
+          should separate multiple servers by commas. The equivalent of
+          the preceding example would be:
         </para>
 
 <programlisting>
 ...
-proxy-backend-addresses = 192.168.0.1:3306, 192.168.0.2:3306
+proxy-backend-addresses = 192.168.0.1:3306,192.168.0.2:3306
 </programlisting>
       </listitem>