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From:paul.dubois Date:March 27 2011 12:29am
Subject:svn commit - mysqldoc@oter02: r25583 - in trunk: . workbench
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Author: pd221994
Date: 2011-03-27 01:29:44 +0100 (Sun, 27 Mar 2011)
New Revision: 25583

Log:
 r46375@dhcp-adc-twvpn-1-vpnpool-10-154-12-35:  paul | 2011-03-26 17:48:34 -0500
 General Workbench revisions


Modified:
   svk:merge
   trunk/workbench/home.xml

Property changes on: trunk
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Modified: svk:merge
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Changed blocks: 0, Lines Added: 0, Lines Deleted: 0; 1277 bytes


Modified: trunk/workbench/home.xml
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--- trunk/workbench/home.xml	2011-03-27 00:29:37 UTC (rev 25582)
+++ trunk/workbench/home.xml	2011-03-27 00:29:44 UTC (rev 25583)
Changed blocks: 6, Lines Added: 23, Lines Deleted: 36; 4389 bytes

@@ -10,9 +10,8 @@
   <title>The Home Screen</title>
 
   <para>
-    When &workbench; is first started you will presented with the
-    <guilabel>Home</guilabel> screen. There are two main sections of the
-    <guilabel>Home</guilabel> screen:
+    When &workbench; first starts, you are presented with the
+    <guilabel>Home</guilabel> screen, which has two main sections:
   </para>
 
   <itemizedlist>

@@ -41,7 +40,7 @@
   </note>
 
   <para>
-    These can be seen in the following screenshot:
+    The two sections can be seen in the following screenshot:
   </para>
 
   <figure id="wb-homepage">

@@ -62,9 +61,9 @@
 
     <para>
       Workbench Central enables you to keep up to date with &workbench;
-      news, events and resources. You can read the developer blogs, find
-      out what's new in the release, access the forums, check for
-      updates and file a bug report.
+      news, events, and resources. You can read the developer blogs,
+      find out what's new in the release, access the forums, check for
+      updates, and file a bug report.
     </para>
 
     <para>

@@ -75,39 +74,38 @@
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          What's new: A list of bug fixes and changes.
+          What's new: A list of bug fixes and changes
         </para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          MySQL Doc Library: Built in documentation.
+          MySQL Doc Library: Built-in documentation
         </para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
           MySQL Bug Reporter: Links to the MySQL bug system, where you
-          can report bugs.
+          can report bugs
         </para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          MySQL Team Blog: Currently links to Workbench team blog.
+          MySQL Team Blog: Links to the Workbench team blog
         </para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Workbench Team Blog: Links to Workbench team blog.
+          Workbench Team Blog: Links to the Workbench team blog
         </para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          MySQL Newsletter: Currently links to the MySQL Developer
-          forum.
+          MySQL Newsletter: Links to the MySQL Developer forum
         </para>
       </listitem>
 

@@ -121,47 +119,36 @@
 
     <para>
       The Workspace is designed to enable you to quickly get to the task
-      you would like to carry out. For convenience it is divided into
-      three main areas, in alignment with &workbench; functionality:
+      you would like to carry out. In alignment with &workbench;
+      functionality, it is divided into three main areas:
     </para>
 
     <orderedlist>
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          SQL Development
+          <emphasis role="bold">SQL Development</emphasis>. For further
+          information, see <xref linkend="wb-sql-development"/>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Data Modelling
+          <emphasis role="bold">Data Modeling</emphasis>. For further
+          information, see <xref linkend="wb-data-modeling"/>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Server Administration
+          <emphasis role="bold">Server Administration</emphasis>. For
+          further information, see
+          <xref linkend="wb-server-administration"/>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
 
     </orderedlist>
 
-    <para>
-      For further information on SQL Development, see
-      <xref linkend="wb-sql-development"/>.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
-      For further information on Data Modeling, see
-      <xref linkend="wb-data-modeling"/>.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
-      For further information on Server Administration, see
-      <xref linkend="wb-server-administration"/>.
-    </para>
-
   </section>
 
   <section id="wb-size">

@@ -170,8 +157,8 @@
 
     <para>
       From version 5.2.10, the &workbench; application features a fixed
-      minimum window size of 1024x768. You will not be able to manually
-      reduce the size of the application to less than this resolution.
+      minimum window size of 1024x768. You cannot reduce the size of the
+      application to less than this resolution.
     </para>
 
   </section>


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