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From:tony.bedford Date:December 3 2010 11:03am
Subject:svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r24212 - trunk/refman-common
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Author: tbedford
Date: 2010-12-03 12:03:18 +0100 (Fri, 03 Dec 2010)
New Revision: 24212

Log:
Minor corrections and tense changes.

Modified:
   trunk/refman-common/mui-core.xml


Modified: trunk/refman-common/mui-core.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/refman-common/mui-core.xml	2010-12-03 04:15:01 UTC (rev 24211)
+++ trunk/refman-common/mui-core.xml	2010-12-03 11:03:18 UTC (rev 24212)
Changed blocks: 9, Lines Added: 19, Lines Deleted: 16; 3417 bytes

@@ -35,15 +35,15 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    The installer is compatible with pre-existing installations, it will
-    simply enumerate these and add them to its list of installed
+    The installer is compatible with pre-existing installations, it
+    simply enumerates these and adds them to its list of installed
     products. Note that the installer is bound to the main server
     version. There is one version of the installer for MySQL Server 5.1,
     and another for MySQL Server 5.5 and so on.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    The &mui; comes in two versions:
+    The &mui; is available in two versions:
   </para>
 
   <orderedlist>

@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
 
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        Web Installer - this is designed to download and install
+        Web Installer - this is designed to download and install any
         required packages over the internet.
       </para>
     </listitem>

@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
   <para>
     The &mui; performs initial configuration of applications, for
     example in &workbench; it will create initial connections to allow
-    you to start using &workbench; to administer you servers
+    you to start using &workbench; to administer your servers
     immediately.
   </para>
 

@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
 
   <para>
     Once the installer itself has been installed, and started, the
-    following screen will be displayed:
+    following screen is displayed:
   </para>
 
   <figure id="mui-welcome">

@@ -120,7 +120,8 @@
 
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        Remove Products - Remove a currently installed product.
+        Remove Products - Allows you to remove a currently installed
+        product.
       </para>
     </listitem>
 

@@ -131,9 +132,10 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    Click this option will take you to the Feature Selection page. Here
-    you can select the products you want to install, and their specific
-    components. This is shown in the following screenshot:
+    Clicking this option will take you to the <guilabel>Feature
+    Selection</guilabel> page. Here you can select the products you want
+    to install, and their specific components. This is shown in the
+    following screenshot:
   </para>
 
   <figure id="mui-feature-selection">

@@ -170,7 +172,8 @@
   </figure>
 
   <para>
-    You can click Execute to begin the instalation process:
+    You can click <guibutton>Execute</guibutton> to begin the
+    instalation process:
   </para>
 
   <figure id="mui-installation-in-progress">

@@ -186,8 +189,8 @@
   </figure>
 
   <para>
-    When the installation is complete you will be taken to the Complete
-    page:
+    When the installation is complete you will be taken to the
+    <guilabel>Installation Complete</guilabel> page:
   </para>
 
   <figure id="mui-installation-complete">

@@ -240,9 +243,9 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    Clicking this option on the <guilabel>Welcome</guilabel> screen will
-    display currently installed products. Deselect items you do not wish
-    to be removed. Selected items will be removed.
+    Clicking this option on the <guilabel>Welcome</guilabel> screen
+    displays currently installed products. Deselect items you do not
+    wish to be removed. Selected items are removed.
   </para>
 
   <figure id="mui-remove-products">


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