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From:jon.stephens Date:September 24 2010 7:37am
Subject:svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r22839 - trunk/cluster-manager-1.0
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Author: jstephens
Date: 2010-09-24 09:37:18 +0200 (Fri, 24 Sep 2010)
New Revision: 22839

Log:

Revisions based on feedback from Erlend (part)



Modified:
   trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-client-commands.xml
   trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-install.xml


Modified: trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-client-commands.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-client-commands.xml	2010-09-23 22:38:50 UTC (rev 22838)
+++ trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-client-commands.xml	2010-09-24 07:37:18 UTC (rev 22839)
Changed blocks: 4, Lines Added: 6, Lines Deleted: 6; 2146 bytes

@@ -955,9 +955,9 @@
 
     <para>
       A <firstterm>site</firstterm>, in terms of MySQL Cluster and
-      &mcm;, is a collection of one or more management agents running on
-      one or more host computers. Each agent is identified by the
-      combination of two pieces of information:
+      &mcm;, is a collection of one or more host computers where &mcm;
+      agents are running. Each agent is identified by the combination of
+      two pieces of information:
     </para>
 
     <itemizedlist>

@@ -1787,7 +1787,7 @@
 </programlisting>
 
       <para>
-        This output show that there are two packages defined for the
+        This output shows that there are two packages defined for the
         site named <literal>mysite</literal>; these packages are named
         <literal>yourpackage</literal> and <literal>mypackage</literal>.
         The package <literal>yourpackage</literal> consists of the MySQL

@@ -1854,7 +1854,7 @@
 
 <programlisting>
 create cluster {--package=|-P }<replaceable>package-name</replaceable> 
-    {--processhosts|-R }<replaceable>process-host-list</replaceable> <replaceable>cluster-name</replaceable>
+    {--processhosts=|-R }<replaceable>process-host-list</replaceable> <replaceable>cluster-name</replaceable>
 
 <replaceable>process-host-list</replaceable>:
     <replaceable>process-name</replaceable>@<replaceable>host</replaceable>[,<replaceable>process-name</replaceable>@<replaceable>host</replaceable>[,...]]

@@ -5717,7 +5717,7 @@
         <literal>start cluster</literal>, then change node number 4 back
         from <command>ndbd</command> (single-threaded) to
         <command>ndbmtd</command> (multi-threaded) using <literal>change
-        cluster</literal>, then verify the change using <literal>show
+        process</literal>, then verify the change using <literal>show
         status</literal>:
       </para>
 


Modified: trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-install.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-install.xml	2010-09-23 22:38:50 UTC (rev 22838)
+++ trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-install.xml	2010-09-24 07:37:18 UTC (rev 22839)
Changed blocks: 2, Lines Added: 4, Lines Deleted: 5; 1408 bytes

@@ -343,7 +343,7 @@
 
     <note>
       <para>
-        <literal>##</literal> in the &mcm; configuration file indicates
+        <literal>#</literal> in the &mcm; configuration file indicates
         the beginning of a comment; the comment continues to the end of
         the line.
       </para>

@@ -466,10 +466,9 @@
           </row>
           <row>
             <entry><literal>manager-directory</literal></entry>
-            <entry>A valid path (relative to the &mcm; installation directory)</entry>
-            <entry>Default: <literal>manager</literal> (use
-              <quote><literal>.</literal></quote> or omit this setting
-              altogether to specify)</entry>
+            <entry>A valid absolute path (if the directory does not exist, it is created)</entry>
+            <entry>Default: <literal>manager</literal> (you must modify or replace this
+              value)</entry>
             <entry>The <replaceable>manager</replaceable> directory contains &mcm; data
               files and MySQL Cluster configuration and data files. More
               information about these is provided later in this section.</entry>


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