Author: jstephens
Date: 2010-09-24 09:37:18 +0200 (Fri, 24 Sep 2010)
New Revision: 22839
Log:
Revisions based on feedback from Erlend (part)
Modified:
trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-client-commands.xml
trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-install.xml
Modified: trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-client-commands.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-client-commands.xml 2010-09-23 22:38:50 UTC (rev 22838)
+++ trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-client-commands.xml 2010-09-24 07:37:18 UTC (rev 22839)
Changed blocks: 4, Lines Added: 6, Lines Deleted: 6; 2146 bytes
@@ -955,9 +955,9 @@
<para>
A <firstterm>site</firstterm>, in terms of MySQL Cluster and
- &mcm;, is a collection of one or more management agents running on
- one or more host computers. Each agent is identified by the
- combination of two pieces of information:
+ &mcm;, is a collection of one or more host computers where &mcm;
+ agents are running. Each agent is identified by the combination of
+ two pieces of information:
</para>
<itemizedlist>
@@ -1787,7 +1787,7 @@
</programlisting>
<para>
- This output show that there are two packages defined for the
+ This output shows that there are two packages defined for the
site named <literal>mysite</literal>; these packages are named
<literal>yourpackage</literal> and <literal>mypackage</literal>.
The package <literal>yourpackage</literal> consists of the MySQL
@@ -1854,7 +1854,7 @@
<programlisting>
create cluster {--package=|-P }<replaceable>package-name</replaceable>
- {--processhosts|-R }<replaceable>process-host-list</replaceable> <replaceable>cluster-name</replaceable>
+ {--processhosts=|-R }<replaceable>process-host-list</replaceable> <replaceable>cluster-name</replaceable>
<replaceable>process-host-list</replaceable>:
<replaceable>process-name</replaceable>@<replaceable>host</replaceable>[,<replaceable>process-name</replaceable>@<replaceable>host</replaceable>[,...]]
@@ -5717,7 +5717,7 @@
<literal>start cluster</literal>, then change node number 4 back
from <command>ndbd</command> (single-threaded) to
<command>ndbmtd</command> (multi-threaded) using <literal>change
- cluster</literal>, then verify the change using <literal>show
+ process</literal>, then verify the change using <literal>show
status</literal>:
</para>
Modified: trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-install.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-install.xml 2010-09-23 22:38:50 UTC (rev 22838)
+++ trunk/cluster-manager-1.0/mcm-install.xml 2010-09-24 07:37:18 UTC (rev 22839)
Changed blocks: 2, Lines Added: 4, Lines Deleted: 5; 1408 bytes
@@ -343,7 +343,7 @@
<note>
<para>
- <literal>##</literal> in the &mcm; configuration file indicates
+ <literal>#</literal> in the &mcm; configuration file indicates
the beginning of a comment; the comment continues to the end of
the line.
</para>
@@ -466,10 +466,9 @@
</row>
<row>
<entry><literal>manager-directory</literal></entry>
- <entry>A valid path (relative to the &mcm; installation directory)</entry>
- <entry>Default: <literal>manager</literal> (use
- <quote><literal>.</literal></quote> or omit this setting
- altogether to specify)</entry>
+ <entry>A valid absolute path (if the directory does not exist, it is created)</entry>
+ <entry>Default: <literal>manager</literal> (you must modify or replace this
+ value)</entry>
<entry>The <replaceable>manager</replaceable> directory contains &mcm; data
files and MySQL Cluster configuration and data files. More
information about these is provided later in this section.</entry>
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