svn commit - mysqldoc@docsrva: r3164 - trunk/gui-common

[plavin]

Author: plavin
Date: 2006-08-30 21:11:10 +0200 (Wed, 30 Aug 2006)
New Revision: 3164

Log:
Translation notes appendix

Modified:
   trunk/gui-common/appendix-translator-notes.xml


Modified: trunk/gui-common/appendix-translator-notes.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/gui-common/appendix-translator-notes.xml	2006-08-30 19:08:40 UTC (rev 3163)
+++ trunk/gui-common/appendix-translator-notes.xml	2006-08-30 19:11:10 UTC (rev 3164)
Changed blocks: 4, Lines Added: 6, Lines Deleted: 6; 2078 bytes

@@ -10,12 +10,12 @@
     not available in your preferred language. If you would like to
     translate the software, or its documentation, or participate in that
     translation, <emphasis>please contact the MySQL documentation team
-    before starting your translation!</emphasis>
+    before starting your translation.</emphasis>
   </para>
 
   <para>
     The MySQL documentation team's address is
-    <email>docs@stripped</email>. In your mail, please state what you
+    <email>docs@stripped</email>. In your email, please state what you
     would like to translate (the tools, their documentation, or even the
     whole MySQL reference manual if you dare), and give some information
     regarding your background:

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
 
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        In which country and city are you located?
+        Where do you live?
       </para>
     </listitem>
 

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
 
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        Will you work alone, or with a group of translators?
+        Will you work alone or with a group of translators?
       </para>
     </listitem>
 

@@ -73,13 +73,13 @@
 
   <para>
     The format used for both software and documentation is
-    <emphasis>DocBook XML</emphasis>. From that base format, all other
+    <emphasis role="bold">DocBook XML</emphasis>. From that base format, all
other
     available formats (HTML, CHM, PDF, etc.) are being generated. It
     would be a pity if you started translating, say, the HTML version of
     this documentation, because we will not be able to use it in that
     format. Also, you might find that someone else has already done (or
     is in the process of doing) that translation. So, once again, please
-    contact the MySQL documentation team first!
+    contact the MySQL documentation team first.
   </para>
 
 </appendix>